Improving Your Sentences.
Look at the sentences below. Select one and rewrite it using better verbs, adverbs, adjectives and nouns.You may do more than one sentence if you would like to.
The tree was on the cliff.
The man walked down the road.
The car drove along the road.
The lady got her keys out of her bag.
The boy opened the door to the classroom.
The girl picked up the flower and gave it to the man.
Student
New Sentence
Example
The fraglle kauri clung tightly to the windswept ledge.
Joy
The shiny motorcycle raced along the brightly colored race track.
Astarlii
The tiny young boy opened the tall dull door and into the noisy classroom .
Cassandra
The kind female pulled the scented rose from the rocky ground and gently handed it to the delicate elder.
William
The racing car dashed right past the buildings with the speed of light and the shing racing car rushed throught slippery racing track and then drifted at the very edge of the rocky ledge.
Andy
The big tree was the hill.
Zion
The old Man slowly walked up the road.
Muneerah
Maya
the wrinkled nanny got her old wallet out of her bright purse.
Anya
The beautiful lady gave over the small buttercup flower and gave it to the tall handsome man.
Piper
The kind little girl picked a brightly coloured flower and gave it to the tall happy man.
The lovley woman got her golden yellow keys from her sparkling sequin purse.
Felix
The weak and poor hobo walked down the busy alley.
Udita
The young,sweet little girl bought a bunch of flowers and gave them to the happy old man.
Tanaka
The prances slowly walked along the parch
Regan
The shiny key was in the bag
Wayne
The Ferrari zoomed down the rough and hard race track.
Sky
The child opened the big old door in the old classroom.
Haadi
The spoky car drove around the irytating road
Bridget
The caring little girl picked up a orange flower and gave it to the poor old man.
Wendell
The male walked down the road.
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Jasmine
The red corvette cruised along the main highway.
Nicky
Gloria
The handsome, young gentleman walked down the enormous, long driveway.
Keelan
The 4 year old boy opened the new gold door to the fantastic new
class room.
Pashan
A little wite puppy was trapped in the dark scary cave...
Matthew
The old car slowly got to its home....
Rical
The shiny red car skated across the icy road
Kezialine
The elderly man tumbled down the wet,muddy road.
Joyce
The poor,elderly gentleman wondered down the enormous,rocky alley-way
Look at the sentences below. Select one and rewrite it using better verbs, adverbs, adjectives and nouns.You may do more than one sentence if you would like to.
The tree was on the cliff.
The man walked down the road.
The car drove along the road.
The lady got her keys out of her bag.
The boy opened the door to the classroom.
The girl picked up the flower and gave it to the man.
Student
New Sentence
The lovley woman got her golden yellow keys from her sparkling sequin purse.
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class room.